Change?

So heres that poem I said I wrote and was planning on submitting to the school paper. Give me feedback if you like it/or if theres somthing I should change. Thanks :D



Looking at you, I’m holding my breath,
For once in this life I’m scared to death.
We’re crashing into a place unknown,
We’re lost in this place but it feels like home.
There’s reality deep in your eyes.
I see it clearly, there are no lies.
I’m where I belong, with you tonight,
Being with you everything feels right.
I’m feeling alive, this is my prime.
It’s like being in love, to feel, for the first time.